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RelayDesk landing-page rescue

This page shows excerpts from the $99 full rewrite. The downloadable three-page PDF shows the presentation and depth of the $49 clarity audit. RelayDesk is a fictional AI support product; the page, observations, and rewrite exist only to demonstrate the work and are not client results.

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01 — Priority findings

Fix the decisions that block understanding first.

01

The headline names a category, not an outcome

“AI-powered customer support” sounds familiar but gives a buyer no reason to switch. Lead with the backlog and response-time change the product creates.

02

The CTA asks for commitment before confidence

A demo is a high-friction first step for a small team. Let visitors see the workflow or calculate the time saved before asking for a call.

03

Proof is disconnected from the buying decision

Logo rows do not answer whether setup is fast, replies stay on-brand, or a human can take over. Put proof beside those objections.

02 — Paste-ready hero

Clear the support queue before it becomes another hiring plan.

RelayDesk answers routine product questions from your approved help content, then hands every uncertain conversation to a human—with the source and context attached.

See a sample support queueSecondary: Calculate hours saved

03 — Section message map

Give every section one job.

  1. ProblemSupport questions are growing faster than the team answering them.
  2. PromiseClear routine questions automatically while your team keeps the conversations that need judgment.
  3. How it worksConnect the help center, approve the answer rules, and review every automated reply from one queue.
  4. ProofShow time-to-first-value, escalation accuracy, and a real annotated answer—not an unlabeled logo wall.
  5. Next stepInvite the visitor to inspect a sample queue before asking for a demo.

04 — Alternatives and metadata

Five lower-friction CTA options.

  1. CTA 1See a sample support queue
  2. CTA 2Test an answer from your help center
  3. CTA 3Calculate the weekly hours saved
  4. CTA 4Watch a two-minute escalation
  5. CTA 5Review the setup checklist
  6. SEO titleRelayDesk — AI support answers with human handoff
  7. Meta descriptionAnswer routine product questions from approved help content and hand uncertain conversations to a human with full context.

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